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symbol is big enough.
go 50% shrink
dont listen to that leaky penny's bullshit.
the first one loked nice.
i liked it,
and think it overall looks better then this one.
having just the b looks a bit strange to me.
not sure tho, mayb im wrong.
How about you let the adults do their work and go run off and play? Your logo was a piece of shit and now you're butthurt.
Child.
Leaky Penny
www.leakypenny.com
When I leave, close together like butt cheeks.
-Grits N' Gravy
The back loop on the B is killing you - it's making the seal right-heavy. Imo, you can fix the seal in one quick move - enlarge the B to whatever size is required to center it in the seal and let the loop and the top point extend outside the circle. That should fix the offset and give the B enough weight to counteract the thick seal border.
Still don't like the bottom text. Too formal, wrong proportions, dull. This thing needs a shot of fun and it's going to have to be in the bottom text if you want this seal. Try this - replace the B with a C and just call yourself "Chelsea - commercial designer".
+1 on the Chelsea comment. Just because it's purely font doesn't mean you can't add a bit of personality to it. This is way better than the first one.
Leaky Penny
www.leakypenny.com
When I leave, close together like butt cheeks.
-Grits N' Gravy
Thank you. I will try that. Any ideas for the font on the lower text though?
Isn't this the mark for Bally shoes?
Mara
I looked up Bally shoes and I didn't find it, however, now it reminds me of Bally Fitness. It was just meant to be iconic of my last initial.
I see. Well, it reminded me of Bally *something* ;-) for what that's worth. It also reminds me of any number of fountain pen companies that use a scripty initial like that on their caps. Waterman comes to mind. Are you sure you can't think of something a little more distinctively about *you*?
Mara
Agree with using your given name only...perhaps try writing your name Chelsea.
Paddle faster, I hear banjos.