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cbirenll's picture
27 pencils

#2

This is version 2 of the previously posted logo. I tried just my last initial, and adjusted the font slightly.

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qwertyale's picture
1834 pencils

symbol is big enough.
go 50% shrink

yes I'm brazilian xD

hondrcr7's picture
26 pencils

dont listen to that leaky penny's bullshit.
the first one loked nice.
i liked it,
and think it overall looks better then this one.
having just the b looks a bit strange to me.
not sure tho, mayb im wrong.

Leaky Penny's picture
2612 pencils

How about you let the adults do their work and go run off and play? Your logo was a piece of shit and now you're butthurt.

Child.

Leaky Penny
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I'm going to print it out and eat it.

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Art D. Rector's picture
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The back loop on the B is killing you - it's making the seal right-heavy. Imo, you can fix the seal in one quick move - enlarge the B to whatever size is required to center it in the seal and let the loop and the top point extend outside the circle. That should fix the offset and give the B enough weight to counteract the thick seal border.

Still don't like the bottom text. Too formal, wrong proportions, dull. This thing needs a shot of fun and it's going to have to be in the bottom text if you want this seal. Try this - replace the B with a C and just call yourself "Chelsea - commercial designer".

Leaky Penny's picture
2612 pencils

+1 on the Chelsea comment. Just because it's purely font doesn't mean you can't add a bit of personality to it. This is way better than the first one.

Leaky Penny
Check out what I've been up to lately!
http://petersonjoseph.com

I'm going to print it out and eat it.

-Unknown Artist

cbirenll's picture
27 pencils

Thank you. I will try that. Any ideas for the font on the lower text though?

mara06's picture
2549 pencils

Isn't this the mark for Bally shoes?

Mara

cbirenll's picture
27 pencils

I looked up Bally shoes and I didn't find it, however, now it reminds me of Bally Fitness. It was just meant to be iconic of my last initial.

mara06's picture
2549 pencils

I see. Well, it reminded me of Bally *something* ;-) for what that's worth. It also reminds me of any number of fountain pen companies that use a scripty initial like that on their caps. Waterman comes to mind. Are you sure you can't think of something a little more distinctively about *you*?

Mara

3dogmama's picture
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Agree with using your given name only...perhaps try writing your name Chelsea.

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