2nd card design
groakybaby (45 points) | Tue, 2005-12-20 13:17This is my second design (i submitted the fat goose for critique previously). I reckon this could be used as a card design. Any thoughts for improvement?
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It's a little bit homoerotic :) I'm not sure if that was the goal.
Same thing with the goose card, let the illustration do the talking. And yes it is a bit homoerotic.
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"The higher you jump on the flagpole, the higher the bonus you receive."
it's kinda a homoerotic,
I would crop the illustration a bit differently. There is too much space on the right. The type can be much smaller too. I agree that it implies unexpected events for a birthday card. :)