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SEIRAT's picture
98 pencils

3br = express yourself

this is a logo for team in our college 3br means express i typed the word in Arabic also i make it as a shape of human with powerful view
this is may be my first work in logo i really need you critique as strong as it is i will learn from it

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YoungZM's picture
917 pencils

What is the team in college? Football? Cricket? Math? The mark doesn't tell me much in that department. It's also very messy and hard to grasp the concept of, I don't get humanist from the grungy stroke pattern at all.

You may want to get off the computer before you start. Use a sketchbook and a pencil to come up with ideas rather than just typing arabic words or characters and then setting them with a stroke after pen tooling it. A process like that won't create any resonance without prior thought and consideration.

ucomefindme's picture
142 pencils

Young and the Restless anyone? Cool mark but ZM has it down pact. *good advice

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