3View logo (First)
miLAN (21 pencils) | Fri, 2007-02-02 09:30
Hey to all.
This is the first logo I designed for a friend of mine. He is opening an advertising company and asked me if I can come up with a logo (and a catch phrase). I am fairly new to designing logos because I am a copywriter, but I wanted to try it out :-)
I would welcome all comments and critiques.
Thanks.
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I like the 3-eyed shape thing! but trash the rest.
I would get rid of the "start>proceed>succeed" altogether — that doesn't make good logo material. Or if you must, simplify it. Make it simple black text below the logo or something.
For the "3View" text, make it a solid color (black would work well) and place it to the side of the 3-eyed shape instead of tucked away underneath it. That's my option.
I agree with Apfhex. You need to get rid of everything other than the 3 eyed illustration, which is really cool. But everything else just makes it look like a template. It doesn't look that original. The typography treatment really doesn't go well, perhaps if you experimented with different typefaces, the "start>proceed>succeed" would be executed well and would work, otherwise it is too tight and just doesn't work.
I hope these suggestions help. What does your friend think of it?
Suzanne J. Maestri :: Graphic Designer
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