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Ad concept

Ad concept for a large nautique employer. If you work there, you have some perspective to grow and, for example, work your way up from worker to captain.

When the concept is chosen we want to use real photography.

(my first post here, so be gentle :)

Roelio

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Jammo's picture
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Welcome to CB - and great first critique post too.

I really like the concept you've chosen, in terms of putting a message across clearly, you've nailed it, imho.

I would really like you to show us the finished photography version as I reckon this would look great!

I dont really think I have any suggestions, how are you planning to use type in this advert?

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paka's picture
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Great idea :)

david.rudaitis's picture
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Great idea! I think this is perfect to convey what you are looking for. If I was to say anything negative about it would be, that the concept has been done before. But, I really do like the concept. Keep up the good work.

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