Ad for illustration module at uni

freehand? do people still want to learn it even if adobe wont develop any upgrades and stuff?

thx for the comments. any suggestions on the plane? do you think i should take it out altogether or work on a different illustration? ps. yup we still learn freehand at uni - as you say dunno how useful it will be.

If the plane was more realistic you'd have a much better overall ad design. Right now it looks very 'child-like'. Otherwise very retro-cool looking.

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natobasso

I like the over all desigh but 3 things:

1. the website is not clear because it's not well aligned. If you move it to the very bottom and space it out.

2. The address, perhaps you can find a better location for it at the bottom right corner- just above or below the easy fly log, right justified maybe?

3. I like the phrase "Flying with us is easier than easy" perhaps you can draw more attention to it? Why doesnt it go to the very top instead? swap places with the info.

In general I like the concept it makes a very nice poster. You just need to try different text layouts. Remember there isnt a rule that says everything should be in one line or in one type face...

Good luck :)

Thanks for your comments - they are much appreciated. I will have a look at the things above before I send it off :)