AD for LCD
PODGORELEC (13 pencils) | Thu, 2010-09-23 19:26
AD for 22" lcd picture frame imitate. AD for magazines.
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What kind of magazine? Who is the target audience? What's the concept?
Leaky Penny
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I'm going to print it out and eat it.
-Unknown Artist
agree.
I feel it so "industrial"... I don't know if the target will like it
yes I'm brazilian xD
Is there a concept? How is this almost an optical illusion? I don't get it.
Ricky Sam
www.rickysam.com
I'm not sure I get it either.
But that aside.... Why are you covering half of the product you are trying to sell with the 22" flash? You have plenty of options.
"For the creation of 22"LCDdisplay the consideration to the slim look has resulted in an extraordinary work with the frame"
Your copy is garbage.
Your 'inch' mark is upside down.
Add more lens flares.
living on dreams and custard creams.
Are you selling the picture frame that goes around the monitor? Not really sure what the product is either.
Not only are your inch marks upside down - they're not even inch marks ("), that's an upside down quote mark (”).
Plus what they said. ^^^^^
Thanks for answering!
All your answers are giving me think :) And with all the criticisms, I fully agree.
"For the Creation of 22" the Consideration LCDdisplay to thr slim look has resulted, and an extraordinary WORK WITH THE FRAME " goes out, basically it was being used as a place holder text only text that was not an ordinary Lorem Ipsum: (
"Your 'inch' mark is upside down." I am stupid, this is bad mistake : (
Once again, thank you very much for your answers. You save me many hours of thinking.
Fix the ad and post progress. OK?
I apologize because my English is very terrible. I hope to have perfected.
Regards, Uros
the glow effect is wonderful but the environment doesn't compliment the LCD, You need to go more realistic>>>>>>>>>...