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fulviatan's picture
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Advertising for a sexyshop

Sorry for my terrible english but i am italian, this is an adv for on of my client her in Italy. welcome to any critics

Advertising for a sexyshop

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Tigerstorm's picture
1009 pencils

It's really good.. I think the symbole and the font is perfect and the red band in the air around the body is really nice..

Good job :)

Oh yeah the girl is cute as well :P

Ivan's picture

I'm not quite sure what this ad tells me. How is the headline related to the visual?

ajojeda's picture
23 pencils

Looks good with the ribbon and the logo...HOWEVER nudity is not necesary in this ad because all you need is to have a female in lingerie, in some low cut jeans and a skimpy shirt, or undressing to have the same if not a more powerful effect than a cutting straight to the point.
::RECAP::
~Great effects
~Nudity not needed, get more powerful effect with clothing
~In advertising NEVER USE NUDITY!!!

ajojeda
Shout Corporation
Working Worldwide
http://www.shoutco.com

Scabby's picture
127 pencils

Ajojeda, your comments on nudity are true for America, but as all who have spent time in Italy know, advertising has a different sense of what is appropriate. Just as Ivan discussed the differences in advertising between an Islamic nation and a Christian (I suppose that’s what we are in the Americas) nation, rules on what is acceptable in an ad are never universal.

fulviatan's picture
11 pencils

usually, for this client i do not use nudity but in this case the client want to use this model for the adv, the red band is completly pictured with the brush of photoshop.

nerdunit's picture
64 pencils

The logo is washed, the girl is hot, the red band is weak, and there is no marketing message. Is this shop selling the slipon the girl is wearing? Does the girl work for this shop? Where will this ad be placed? The byline, enjoy your sex life is pretty weak in my opinion. Cross out the word life and leave it crossed out in the byline and re-read it to give you some more ideas. this is also applicable wih crossing out the word sex, so it incinuates that life=sex heh. This type of ad altogether without any brand recogs, is too much guess work. Pick whether you are advertising a brand, a store, or a product, or all three, and revise. Great photo whoever took it. =)

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