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sergei.greyvenstein's picture
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AKA - Loading & Transport Concept 3 With or With out

HI Guys

This is concept. What i want to know is is the mark strong enough without the blocks and any other comments you can add.

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Kscho77's picture
38 pencils

I could see a client really taking to this logo, although in my opinion the style is a little dated. It is masculine and I could easily see it on the side of an 18-wheeler. I believe the color is appropriate also. It may be the obvious solution for this client, but it could also be the right one!

mbennett2's picture
425 pencils

I like this one best. I particularly like the top one, but I would go ahead and spread out the "loading and transport" to be as wide as the baseline of the logo mark. Otherwise it may get lost in smaller sizes.

sergei.greyvenstein's picture
86 pencils

I agree Kscho77 it feels dated and what i tried to achieve with the other two concept was a more modern logo. But this one is stronger. I have reworked the concept a bit.

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maryD's picture
39 pencils

I have to say, I really dislike this one. It's just too much, it's hard to get to the message, if it didn't say loading and transport i would be rather confused, still it seems hard to figure out. herarchy can't be only a thing of color it's a matter of shapes and sizes, it's just too much for my eye to take, it needs to get simple. go more....straight to the point. concept 5B i like that one. this one just says too much and runs the risk of communicating too litle, but that just me.

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