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waffleboy's picture
64 pencils

American Bulldog Breeder

Hey everyone,
I would just like some feedback on this. Client wanted a bulldog's face incorporated. I'm leaning toward the bottom center. Thanks,
Carson

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Robinette's picture
10 pencils

I like the type on the top left the best, it meshes with the illustration better and reads much easier. I would make both of the dog's eyes a little bigger, especially the on in red, its very hard to see. Also the bottom of the mouth looks a little strange to me because there is no chin.

Illustration definitely reads as a dog though and looks great, colors work nicely. The dog on the side of the text has more character but I like it better on top, has a nice triangular shape to the whole thing.

ucomefindme's picture
117 pencils

Nice work, I would say middle center or right center. That right eye is a little off might want to touch that up a little bit.

Art D. Rector's picture
2769 pencils

Are we just picking fonts? I'll take center left.

The problem is the dog - doesn't look like a bulldog to me. Not enough jowl and the face looks too elongated. Boxers have very distinctive flat faces and large jowls. Yours looks like some kind of mixed breed hound.

As always... jmho.

Leaky Penny's picture
2616 pencils

+1 on the boxer vs bulldog

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waffleboy's picture
64 pencils

its American bulldog, so they don't look like a traditional English bulldog. This is the one photo of her dog. This helps me a lot.
Thanks!
Carson

caoimghgin's picture
841 pencils

I think it's nice. I like top left typeface best. I do think the mark is too close to the type. Needs a bit more breathing room. Otherwise, solid stuff.

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NRcreative's picture
239 pencils

i have no complaints on the dog, i asumed that it was the american bulldog,nice ilustration
and i would take center left

Anonymous's picture
141 pencils

Tremendous. Left centre.

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qwertyale's picture
1833 pencils

I see a clown

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riskart1's picture
146 pencils

i like them, but the dog doesn't look like a bulldog to me

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