Hey everyone,
I would just like some feedback on this. Client wanted a bulldog's face incorporated. I'm leaning toward the bottom center. Thanks,
Carson
I like the type on the top left the best, it meshes with the illustration better and reads much easier. I would make both of the dog's eyes a little bigger, especially the on in red, its very hard to see. Also the bottom of the mouth looks a little strange to me because there is no chin.
Illustration definitely reads as a dog though and looks great, colors work nicely. The dog on the side of the text has more character but I like it better on top, has a nice triangular shape to the whole thing.
The problem is the dog - doesn't look like a bulldog to me. Not enough jowl and the face looks too elongated. Boxers have very distinctive flat faces and large jowls. Yours looks like some kind of mixed breed hound.
I think it's nice. I like top left typeface best. I do think the mark is too close to the type. Needs a bit more breathing room. Otherwise, solid stuff.
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I like the type on the top left the best, it meshes with the illustration better and reads much easier. I would make both of the dog's eyes a little bigger, especially the on in red, its very hard to see. Also the bottom of the mouth looks a little strange to me because there is no chin.
Illustration definitely reads as a dog though and looks great, colors work nicely. The dog on the side of the text has more character but I like it better on top, has a nice triangular shape to the whole thing.
Nice work, I would say middle center or right center. That right eye is a little off might want to touch that up a little bit.
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Are we just picking fonts? I'll take center left.
The problem is the dog - doesn't look like a bulldog to me. Not enough jowl and the face looks too elongated. Boxers have very distinctive flat faces and large jowls. Yours looks like some kind of mixed breed hound.
As always... jmho.
+1 on the boxer vs bulldog
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its American bulldog, so they don't look like a traditional English bulldog. This is the one photo of her dog. This helps me a lot.
Thanks!
Carson
I think it's nice. I like top left typeface best. I do think the mark is too close to the type. Needs a bit more breathing room. Otherwise, solid stuff.
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i have no complaints on the dog, i asumed that it was the american bulldog,nice ilustration
and i would take center left
Tremendous. Left centre.
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i like them, but the dog doesn't look like a bulldog to me
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