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andrew.harrison.org

updating the look of my site to celebrate moving to a new server [from my old ISP server that could only use basic html]

this is the blog section, but the basic template will be the same for all the pages.

any feedback appreciated :)

andrew.harrison.org

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zwoelf's picture
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I feel the typography a bit heavy. Typeweights, small margins and lineheight are suggesting a too heavy text. The bold links are just jumping out of the text. I like the retro colouring, and the stripes, but dislike the propositions of the whole sitestructure.

ttaylor's picture
78 pencils

The thing that bothers me most is the width of the blog. Make it a bit bigger and I think it'll look a lot better. I also like the colors and the retro stripes. Great start!

pokie's picture
1198 pencils

I freaking LOVE it!!!!!!! I'd also make the blog wider. The "ah" is outstanding.

hotbones's picture
43 pencils

Looks great! I love the colors , very easy on the eyes.

hotbones

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