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Andy Warhol

This is a project I did for my Literature and Composition Class. I felt it looked best with the "pop" style because it IS a project on Andy Warhol. Tell me what you think. :D

Andy Warhol

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3dogmama's picture
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I'm a huge fan of the man and his work. You captured and conveyed his pop art style so well.

Good job.

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natobasso's picture
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Great job, though I'm pretty sure he wouldn't have used Verdana. :)

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Doug M.'s picture
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I Had to make it legible, It was for my literature and composition class after all. If it weren't, I probably would have used a more fun! font.

natobasso's picture
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Um, how about helvetica or a typewriter font??

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Doug M.'s picture
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actually, it is arial (regular, 12 pt.). I like helvetica, it is the other font I use very often. Arial and Helvetica are my favorite super legible fonts. I like many other fonts though... I've gotten a TON from http://www.dafont.com. I love some of their fonts, so useful...

natobasso's picture
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Okay you got me there. :) Just wanted to point out that using Arial wasn't your only option in this case; in fact, it doesn't really work since it's associated in my mind at least with the modern, computer age. Definitely not something I associate with Warhol.

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Doug M.'s picture
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Ya, that makes sense. I just figured Warhol would have wanted to use something a little more modern because he was slightly ahead of his time. I used his (almost) exact signature as the title, which I think is kinda cool. Maybe something more...retro would work better?

natobasso's picture
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How about a typewriter font? That might be closer to authentic.

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Doug M.'s picture
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have you checked out the second page yet? I think it should work now.

natobasso's picture
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"I like boring things" My new quote. Do you think it will bring me 15 minutes of fame? :)

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Doug M.'s picture
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Definitely. :D

onegirlcreative's picture
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That would be my only suggestion—switch to a better sans serif font. Maybe even Avant Garde? IDK. Experiment. Arial doesn't really go well with the whole pop art-motif.

The text is too tight as left justified on the top mostly. I would adjust that a bit and it'll look better.

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Doug M.'s picture
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ya, I know what you mean. My font choice was kinda bad...too squished. I tried to fit all the text on 1 page, and I succeeded, but it would probably look better and feel less cluttered with a different font. Thanks for the tip. The top left text is too far to the left, I agree. I don't know why I didn't notice that myself! It's pretty bad looking...

Doug M.'s picture
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Can you get to the second page fine? I can't...just concerned. There's two pages. The second one kind of compliments the first.

plugz's picture
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First one is great though.

gwells's picture
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there are widely different amounts of white space around the two text blocks. the first one is intensely cramped. and to nitpick (which i like to do on type), the rag on that first block is really loose.

nice concept and overall work, just clean up that type.

thn007's picture
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oooooo, me likey :D
great great great job bro, thumbs way up on this one :D

Anonymous's picture

I'm actually doing a project over hime for my english class right now!
I think it looks very well done and it truley captured his style.
He was a great man.

Doug M.'s picture
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i don't know what I was thinking with the upper text kerning.

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