this is another adv for the same client, this is used fot advertising in a magazine.
in italy this kind of products is not really accepted by the people in general, with this kind of adv i can put the ads of sex toys everywhere (in normal magazine, newspaper, events ecc.. not specializated for sex)
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I don't really like the image. It just doesn't communicate the message without the text. IMO, the two (text and image) should complement each other. I think you're lacking that in this piece.
Terrell Thornhill
e-zign Design Group
A huge improvement from your nude ad. It still would be more powerful with a female in a skimpy outfit because about 95 percent of people looking for sexual enhancement are men. More appealing:
::RECAP::
~NICE Improvement
~Still more powerful with woman
~Know your audience and who you're trying to sell to.
~Make this ad appealing to older men because most young men dont have a problem with sexual enhancement.
ajojeda
Shout Corporation
Working Worldwide
http://www.shoutco.com
Sorry to keep harassing you ajojeda, but I think you may be looking at this the wrong way. From my understanding, this is an ad for a sex toy shop. Sex toy shops sell sex toys to enhance ones sex life; they don't sell Viagra to old impotent men. Where I live at least, a large percentage of sex toy shops’ cliental are ‘sexually liberated’ women, and so a woman featuring a scantly clad babe would be a serious mistake.
On a semi-related note, America (and Canada) loves its women in skimpy outfits. Much of the world hates America because we are represented across the globe with our women in skimpy clothing. As people working in advertising, I think we must go out of our way to ensure that we don’t promote the view of North American’s as drunken sorority girls who can’t keep their cloths on, as this does a disservice not only to our clients, but to the world.
Thats all.
Scabby
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ajojeda
Shout Corporation
Working Worldwide
http://www.shoutco.com
After getting my Graphics degree in Florence, I worked in Italy for about 2 years before coming back to the U.S., So i'm not making suggestions to markets I don't know. I found that American advertising techniques appealed more in Italy than I here in the U.S. Just letting people know what has worked for me here and abroad. Remember what I say is only opinion and doesn't have to be followed. What I put out there can be accepted or declined. It's just my point of view.
Sorry for the misunderstanding.
ajojeda
ajojeda
Shout Corporation
Working Worldwide
http://www.shoutco.com
looks like a good ad, looks nice. seems like it will also fit your purpose as well, being able to be used in 'regular' magazines.
not sure if there was another critique for the logo, but that male/female/bi logo is really well done. nice work.