Black may be good for making a point, but it's a hell of a waste of ink! I don't know if your tutors will think about that, but running off 100 of these would cost considerably more than if the black and white in the left portion were reversed, in fact I think it probably would work just as well. The small text should be made larger too, I think at least twice the size. Increase the height of the coloured boxes to accommodate it if necessary.
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Black may be good for making a point, but it's a hell of a waste of ink! I don't know if your tutors will think about that, but running off 100 of these would cost considerably more than if the black and white in the left portion were reversed, in fact I think it probably would work just as well. The small text should be made larger too, I think at least twice the size. Increase the height of the coloured boxes to accommodate it if necessary.