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Another Revision

jmonroe (46 points) | Tue, 2008-03-11 01:06

Here is another revision. I think this one is pretty cool. Advice please.

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Another Revision

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3dogmama | Tue, 2008-03-11 01:21

Love the OUTSIDE THE BOX! Well done. Maybe try flushing the lower text to the left with the tail of the seven being the upswipe of the letter V in CREATIVE.

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jmonroe | Tue, 2008-03-11 01:51

I was trying hard to make them blend together. I even made the V larger and red in color. Didn't have the results I wanted.

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KMac | Tue, 2008-03-11 15:26

This looks good. I like how the 7 looks, dropped down like that.

Unless you're going to incorporate the stem of the 7 into the word "creative" I would strongly suggest you move the positioning of the word "creative". Too much interference as it is right now.

Also, in the words "Outside The Box", make the first letters of each word a little bigger so that it is noticeable that there is a difference between the size of the beginning letter and the rest of the word. Right now it's so subtle, it almost looks like a mistake.

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