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Apartment Pads Logo

This is a logo for a .com company that people can go search for local apartments on. This was the final one that the client chose (sorry was not able to put process on). What do you guys think? Any suggestions/etc. Thanks so much!

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dsauna's picture
286 pencils

I really like the concept, but the design is not there yet. I don't think the font working well, neither the colors used, but I can see this becoming a nice logo.

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dirkdirka's picture
14 pencils

Im liking where this is going. Let me share my thoughts really quick though.

Consider matching the font with the rounded blocks a little better. Maybe a Sans Serif? Also consider revising the "roof" to fit the vibe of the logo more. Im seeing this not being one solid piece, right now its kinda 3 different things put together. Think "round" since thats the feel of the mark.

Hope that helps, you are close!

Ivan's picture

The roof is too sharp comparing to the rounded blocks. Also, it feels like the blocks supposed to form a and p, but the a doesn't really work. It feels confusing. Colors are good.

ladylee's picture
141 pencils

Thank you guys for your valuable comments. Yes the original had the "rounded corners roof", I think I will revise it and stick that back in there. I agree the font doesn't really match...yeah the blocks are supposed to for an "A" and "P", I was thinking a font maybe more like the blocks, such as eurostile or something. I will post a revised one when I have time :)

natobasso's picture
3953 pencils

The colors seem really disjointed. Any reason why there are three kinds of brown in it?

ladylee's picture
141 pencils

it's to match the site that it's going on, the customer had to have these colors

natobasso's picture
3953 pencils

Sure, but...groan...makes the logo look disjointed and indecisive.

berryl's picture
1 pencil

its a quite nice logo ..... London Property Rentals

Leaky Penny's picture
2612 pencils

Well, not the greenish olive one, but so far so good. Keep at it!

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