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Nanda, you need to provide briefs for your submissions! This is MEANINGLESS if we don't know the CONTEXT that they are in.

Please if you want constructive criticisms on your work, personal or not, then you NEED to give a LITTLE explanation first, saying" Apple iPOd New Creative" doesn't help!

Apple? Don't even go there. Even if this is for your personal or student portfolio, you CAN NOT try to reinvent ad campaigns or identities for the most successful companies out there. Apple already has an award winning advertising campaign and the ipod commercials and print ads are some of the most recognizable on the planet. You will never be able to justify to a potential client or employer WHY you chose to redo an Apple ad. But then again, Nanda, none of us around here seem to know WHY you do anything, since you never tell us!

But due to lack of descriptions, is it successful? We don't know what the hell you were going for. You're a terrible "Graphic Designer", cause you seem to always omit the basics: CONCEPT. What is yours? Why do you post up every week but don't tell us WHY? Is Design in India in such a sad state of affairs that your training is so half ass that you can't even provide us with a description of the work you do? WHat are you going to do when you have to present this shit to a client? Stand up in the board room and say "Hai, Sorry come again?" (see his last Apple post) Do you enjoy being shot down week after week?

On a positive side, maybe if a bite was taken out of the side of the apple, like the logo itself? Nah, even that wouldnt help...

Spaghetti...

Apple is number one in the MP3 player market because they have the sexiest, and simplest devices out there. This ad shows no features whatsoever, and gives me no desire to buy an iPod.