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APS LIGHTING - SOUND-AV

APS LIGHTING - SOUND-AV

the logo is for a comany which is a resource for sound, lighting and audio visual equipment

Mintsauce's picture
976 pencils

That S is bothering me. What would it look like as a single line?

I also think the tagline is too heavy a font compared to the line weight of the logo type.

If you keep your ears open, you'll see better.

GregSauce's picture
110 pencils

i actually like this. it's a bit busy, but i like the concept!

"Good design is obvious. Great design is transparent."
— Joe Sparano

Alex's picture
230 pencils

I like the idea - but it does read 'ARSE' to me.

Simplifying and refining the letters should fix this.

GregSauce's picture
110 pencils

Ha, i didnt notice that. funny funny

"Good design is obvious. Great design is transparent."
— Joe Sparano

Ivan's picture

I like the idea, but you need to work more on it. It now reads APSF because of the lamps.

dsauna's picture
287 pencils

I like Ahmed as I told you, but as i told you it reads arsf.

dsaunadesign.com

Mintsauce's picture
976 pencils

I tell you, I don't know him.

If you keep your ears open, you'll see better.

allawy's picture
87 pencils

thank you guys for all ur critique and comments
i will try to simplify it and again i will post it on critique section

by the way .........ahmed is my name (:

Mintsauce's picture
976 pencils

Thanks. Good to meet you.

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