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APS LIGHTING - SOUND-AV

allawy (97 pencils) | Thu, 2009-07-23 18:03

the logo is for a comany which is a resource for sound, lighting and audio visual equipment

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Mintsauce | Thu, 2009-07-23 18:19

That S is bothering me. What would it look like as a single line?

I also think the tagline is too heavy a font compared to the line weight of the logo type.

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GregSauce | Fri, 2009-07-24 13:36

i actually like this. it's a bit busy, but i like the concept!

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Alex | Fri, 2009-07-24 13:45

I like the idea - but it does read 'ARSE' to me.

Simplifying and refining the letters should fix this.

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GregSauce | Fri, 2009-07-24 14:36

Ha, i didnt notice that. funny funny

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Ivan | Fri, 2009-07-24 15:16

I like the idea, but you need to work more on it. It now reads APSF because of the lamps.

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dsauna | Fri, 2009-07-24 15:47

I like Ahmed as I told you, but as i told you it reads arsf.

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Mintsauce | Fri, 2009-07-24 16:18

I tell you, I don't know him.

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allawy | Fri, 2009-07-24 19:11

thank you guys for all ur critique and comments
i will try to simplify it and again i will post it on critique section

by the way .........ahmed is my name (:

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Mintsauce | Fri, 2009-07-24 20:29

Thanks. Good to meet you.

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