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art is life my style

ali2006658 (12 pencils) | Wed, 2007-08-08 09:12

my life style is art

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al_flk | Wed, 2007-08-08 10:30

colour scheme is good...and design also better...but please it is looking blank ..

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Ivan | Thu, 2007-08-09 19:05

Typography needs work. It's too simple and bulky. Doesn't reflect the product. Also, all the elements are the same size and importance. I'm lost as a reader. The logo on the bottom needs to be placed somewhere better, it's too distracting.

Most importantly when you design packaging the key is contrast. Make light type on dark background or vica versa.

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