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Audio Warehouse.com

This is a logo design for an online audio store. was going for a web button look. let me know what works or not. I am refining it so its not completely done as far as highlights and color.

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Shuvalof's picture
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+ Good colors and style.

- u have big headphones but small speakers - its unreal. its should be more fat.

now it's not headphones, it reminds the device which dress on a head at shock-therapy.

- 'com': smaller than general text. why? then - maybe u shuld do it white with black(grey) lines.

- why your text is grey , but headphones - black?

and that strange figure ,between speakers. button? i don't think so.

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Ivan's picture

I like the colors and the gloss, but the shape is too complex and the type is hard to read.

KellyR's picture
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I agree - colors are great - but it's a little too detailed for a web logo that's going to be smallish. And "Warehouse" is hard to read in the green (although I'm a huge fan of lime green).

Just take a look at the thumbnail that's produced in the left-hand side of the screen under "Recent Critiques" - notice the things that are hard to read or make out and try to fix from there.

natobasso's picture
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The text will get unreadable at small sizes, try to think more 'square' when designing a logo for best readability at all sizes.

Also, have you done this just in black and white? It will help you see just the shapes instead of getting distracted by color. The 2.0 effect is nice, but you will only be able to use that on the web and keep it consistent. Remove the .com and just play with the company name at first. You don't see Circuit City's logo with the .com on it, for example.

Look at stores like Circuit City and Best Buy and how they apply their logos. You might get some ideas in this direction as far as what I mentioned above.

The house, too, doesn't look enough like a house. It looks more like a squished cube right now. Put two windows on it for eyes and a triangle on top for a head and you get a 2 for 1 deal: house and a person in one icon. :)

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