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I know you want this to be your last round, but this logo really need to be re-thought. I kinda like the idea, but i think the execution of it is awkward. The earphones are too complex and outdated, the 'warehouse' looks visually uncomfortable, and the type face is also stale. And the "green" is way to light in comparison to the grey and hard to read in the type.
Just my thoughts.
Graphic, Web and Logo Designer from Pittsburgh, PA http://www.davidpcrawford.com
I like the concept, and it's looking better than yesterday.
1. The "warehouse" looks like a domestic, residential house. Anything you could do to make it look more like a warehouse, I think would be a good idea.
2. Darken the lime green you have in the website address. Keep the lime green but use the darker version of this color (in the bottom half of the house in the logo).
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Agree with the comment above, I think it's a better improvement from what you showed as before, but the green needs to be darkened.
One more thing, I'm not sure the icon and the type are supposed to go together all time. If you're gonna use them separately, I think they're fine, but if they are meant to be used together, I don't see a good integration between them, what does everyone else think?
Other then that I think you're almost there
dsaunadesign.com
Agree with the comment above, I think it's a better improvement from what you showed as before, but the green needs to be darkened.
One more thing, I'm not sure the icon and the type are supposed to go together all time. If you're gonna use them separately, I think they're fine, but if they are meant to be used together, I don't see a good integration between them, what does everyone else think?
Other then that I think you're almost there
dsaunadesign.com
oops double comment sorry
dsaunadesign.com
it is an awkward solution. the headphones look very "70s." font looks dated. the warehouse isn't a warehouse. try printing that at 1" wide and see what happens to the strokes on those windows and the bottom of the "house" and to the detail on the headphones. remember, if this is a logo, it has to work at less than 1" and more than 1 foot.
it's not necessarily a bad concept, but it's not really all that much of a creative concept. it's pretty cliche.