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B & W Owls 2

davidmcholland (104 pencils) | Sat, 2008-03-01 03:02

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kaiyohtee | Sun, 2008-03-02 01:43

and interesting use of metaphor: owls and books. i didn't see if the last critique was yours as well, but i think this is a bit cleaner. i like the similar stroke weight creates a more clear message.

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dpc | Sun, 2008-03-02 05:28

Whats the creative brief? Who's the client? Whats the concept? What does O.W.L.S. stand for?

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dpc | Sun, 2008-03-02 05:28

Whats the creative brief? Who's the client? Whats the concept? What does O.W.L.S. stand for?

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Graphic, Web and Logo Designer from Pittsburgh, PA http://www.davidpcrawford.com

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mara06 | Mon, 2008-03-03 16:00

This works better than the more elaborate version you first posted. The owl looks a little fierce, though. Maybe if the eyes were focused more on the page? Or would that be too ordinary? I guess I'm just thinking that since this is for children, you might want to make the owl more friendly. Nice logo. I like it.

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Mara

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