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Back to the 80's

kidtone (114 pencils) | Fri, 2005-05-06 23:40

Flyer I made for my house party. :)

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Ivan | Fri, 2005-05-06 23:57

I say cool concept.

Black background is a bit boring and there are too many typefaces.

You may want to stylize the photo a bit, it's too clean and clear now. Maybe posterize it?

Overall I would put the type over the image in the middle like on move posters. And put all the info on the bottom in small.

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ilikesalsa | Sat, 2005-05-07 01:04

i would go with ivan... put the main type like a movie, and then put all the text below it, just like the credits on posters... that would be pretty slick...

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pokie | Sat, 2005-05-07 02:26

But, that's not michael j. fox over there??? ;)

Is this a postcard? I really just don't like the way it is set up... but I hope I'm invited. :)

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whitnet1 | Sat, 2005-05-07 20:43

I agree with Ivan. You've got your composition divided in half and this creates some problems as far as guestalt is concerned...

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natobasso | Mon, 2007-05-21 22:28

Too many fonts! And can you say, 'copyright infringement'?

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