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kidtone's picture
114 pencils

Back to the 80's

Flyer I made for my house party. :)

Back to the 80's

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Ivan's picture

I say cool concept.

Black background is a bit boring and there are too many typefaces.

You may want to stylize the photo a bit, it's too clean and clear now. Maybe posterize it?

Overall I would put the type over the image in the middle like on move posters. And put all the info on the bottom in small.

ilikesalsa's picture
53 pencils

i would go with ivan... put the main type like a movie, and then put all the text below it, just like the credits on posters... that would be pretty slick...

pokie's picture
1198 pencils

But, that's not michael j. fox over there??? ;)

Is this a postcard? I really just don't like the way it is set up... but I hope I'm invited. :)

whitnet1's picture
92 pencils

I agree with Ivan. You've got your composition divided in half and this creates some problems as far as guestalt is concerned...

natobasso's picture
3954 pencils

Too many fonts! And can you say, 'copyright infringement'?

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Client: "can you guys make it more like a power-point presentation, you know, with the sliding text stuff and all?" (http://clientcopia.com/quotes.php?id=7)

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