Bajaj DTS i

nice concept---:)

Hmmm. Not so good. Why alienate all the girl bikers out there?

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Powerpoint is not a design application

I'm sorry, but I think it's a horrid concept. Also, the image quality is less than okay, and the background is offwhite - probably made to match the background of the stock art. Start over.

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Perfectly Lost Designs

i want to see the whole bike. I just don't see the justification for cropping off half of the bike. The work i have seen from you always seems to be minimal, but there never seems to be any reason for it other than the fact that is just compositionally fun. Keep in mind that this is not only art but, more importantly (as your client will tell you) an ad intended to sell a product, and as a consumer, im just not compelled enough to find out more....unless maybe it had a weblink at the bottom....but im under the impression this is a print campaign? There are many ways to approach this concept but im afraid this one just shouldnt be among them.

The "Definately Male" is oddly placed and just bad choice of type...also, why is the logo so small when you have all that room? Natobasso is right, why alienate the female clientele?

Why is the motor cycle cropped like that, why is it standing up on the edge of the page?
Please man, give us some sort of description or we should just stop commenting on your stuff, hopefully that keeps you from posting anything more without explaining your reasoning behind it.

Sorry, don't like this one at all.

The layout is kind of nice, if it wasn't trying to sell what it's not showing (i.e. if the ad had something to do with something other than motorcycles). But the kickstand being a male...

Might as well do a "pull my finger" joke.

I like it, it's fun and will be remembered. I would make the brand logo mucho bigger (just to be safe no one will confuse the brand and remeber it) And I would also move the copy a bit to the left, it's a bit cramped in there and I think the message will still get across. Good job!

use this concept, more of the motorcycle needs to be present in the overall image. The logo also is too small. Perhaps use the logo along with the concept? And I think people would get the point if you didn't spoon serve them. Have "definitely male" larger and at the bottom of the ad, not pointing at the motorcycle. Also, "definitely male" sounds clinical and offensive. Why not something like, "It's a boy!"

If you want to use the sexually suggestive image show the whole cycle and use a tagline that's more universal to men and women.

"One Exciting Ride."

The double entendre will allow the viewer to figure out the inside message for themselves and you can blame them for having the 'dirty mind'.