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balanced fitness website

Im doing this personal training website for somebody. His methodology is approaching a fitness regimine scietifically and he is really into reordig your progress thoroughly. I also did the logo. This is stll in photoshop.

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KrunkPony's picture
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Ignore my spelling errors above. I'm just looking for feedback.

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cubus's picture
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At first glance it looks a bit to high-tech to me. Or maybe that what's so different about his programme? Otherwise I should a some more healthy "now I'm really gonna loose that beer belly" picture.

KrunkPony's picture
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Thanks for the feedback. I'm not really pleased with the header that much at all. I followed his instructions, and yes it does look a bit too high tech. I'll see what I can do about that.

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Sterile would be the word I would describe this layout with. There isn't very much colour, very many images, or very many points of interest. It's a bit bland for something so competitive in today's over-weight country. I would definitely add some more colours - warm colours would be good to draw attention. Adding more images - people working out would probably be good in this case. I would also suggest adding something on the home page that would make the client interested in finding out more - maybe a weight loss calculator or something.

As far as the logo - for having the word "balanced" in the name, the logo is anything but. I would try to even out your typefaces a little more, and maybe focus on the word "balanced" and "fitness" instead of NYC.

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