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band flyer

HulaShakeJaz's picture

final attempt at creating a band flyer. Please let me know what you think!!! I appreciate ALL comments. Thanks.

band flyer
Stack's picture

the composition works with

the composition works with the ghosted image of the band in the background....but, i can't help but wonder what a Japanese-style sunset has to do with a punk rock band. Its very distracting.

HulaShakeJaz's picture

Thanks for the input, Stack.

Thanks for the input, Stack. I was wondering if the sunburst was too Asian. Maybe if I changed the color of it. I was trying to add some color and dimension. They aren't punk rock though. So I was having a difficult time thinking of another design.

ipure's picture

I like the burst, even

I like the burst, even though it is a faded trend. but bring it more from the corner. so you dont see the "sun" just the rays. i think this is the most appealing then the others.

peace

-try to drop the outerglow... maybe thats just a personal thing...
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gwells's picture

it's not just a personal

it's not just a personal thing... the outer glow gives a bad vibe, especially when overused like that (on everything)... it says "look, i have photoshop effects!" it's kind of like using times new roman and arial in your documents.

HulaShakeJaz's picture

Damn Glow!

Thanks guys. I wasn't sure what to do with the font so it would show. Use white???

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