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Baraka Optics

What's the best?

Design 001
or
Design 002

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Baraka Optics

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olliesan1's picture
288 pencils

I think the floral vectors are trendy and way overused. I also think grunge type is overused, but overall I prefer the top one. It's more interesting.

graphikdzyner's picture
13 pencils

I like the overall look and layout of 1... How bout the green/red color concept from 2 instead of the blue in #1 as a minor change... Not a big fan of the blue/red combos... It also feels like the bottom needs a little more weight visually (maybe 2007 in black?

MrSansom's picture
45 pencils

the font seems to scream 20-30 year old dudes. the type that snowboard/ski in the winter and go boating and surfing in the summer. if this is your audience I'd say you're right on track. I don't have a problem with the red/blue combos, but the red shades do really jump out (almost too much). maybe try a different shade of red, something not soooo bright.

The shades:
they need a little work. the whole design is so simple and then it looks like you've done some shadowing on the glasses. i'm not totally against that, but maybe look at going without. the bigger issue to me is that the glasses feel, poorly drawn. they seem disproportionate. i'd say the right eye needs to be a little smaller. it looks like it comes down below the nose and i'm pretty sure that isn't in style. ;-)

love the back head on blue background. very, apple-esque.

overall, nice

-todd-

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pokie's picture
1198 pencils

I LOVE the top hair and text. However, the glasses need to be redrawn and the logo may look a little weird..?

natobasso's picture
3954 pencils

Top one is best. Very cool contrasting colors. The glasses could be highlighted better, though, maybe by facing the person's head up instead of down?

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