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creativemurf (160 pencils) | Fri, 2005-05-20 01:15

I am rethinking my logo. What do you think?

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mrbuhyah | Fri, 2005-05-20 05:29

It's different and neat. I rather like it. However, I think you can do away with that road sketch below the name - its just a bit too much. Good job otherwise!

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dpc | Fri, 2005-05-20 06:19

I don't think i am digging it. My suggestions are:

Get rid of the road, and push the tag-line up under the title.
The font seems to be dated, and seems to have an african tribe feel, i don't think its contemporary or "new." And that "Y" is just too much of a focal point.
Also, that orange as a catalyst does not work. It is really dull.

Overall, i think you may want to try a few more options. This logo needs to be more simplistic.

Hope i get to see more options.

http://www.davidpcrawford.com - http://www.vomit76.com

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Ivan | Fri, 2005-05-20 11:57

I don't like this logo. I see a big contradiction between the tagline and the design of the logo. If you believe in utilitarian design why not have something stark and simple. Or maybe I misunderstood something.

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dpc | Fri, 2005-05-20 19:14

Whats that?

http://www.davidpcrawford.com - http://www.vomit76.com

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Ivan | Fri, 2005-05-20 19:46

imurf is like dpc :)

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dpc | Sat, 2005-05-21 00:05

Oh, yeah, sorry I am slow.

http://www.davidpcrawford.com - http://www.vomit76.com

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Donateko | Sun, 2007-02-18 17:56

What is dpc? lol

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