I'd have different comments to make depending on how you plan to use this layout. Can't tell if this is going to be used for letterhead, poster, brochure...
It's a VERY cool design, though I think the position of the nipple might be a little off. Hmm. Let's see if I can say this without using the word "tweak." I'd lower it a bit and make the upper edge less sharp -- even though you're working with it as the brush's shadow, it bugs me that it doesn't look quite natural, at least not to me; your source material may vary.
I think the graphic is perfect as it is. My only suggestion would be to body text. I think the first line is fine, but the initial caps used in the next three lines are distracting and unnecessary. The font seems almost too delicate in this point size and gray coloring. In fact, the important information -- the exhibition date and location -- actually becomes de-emphasized in the pink and stuck next to large initial cap. I recommend you explore other typography solutions for this text so that it is as stunning as the rest of the design.
Very clever composition. I love the white space. It's appropriate—very succinct and to the point, which is the idea, isn't it?
Your choice of typography is appealing, and yet not overdone. It's a delicate subject and it needs to be approached delicately. Therefore, I agree with your choice of typography.
I like the balance of the logo in the upper right and the paint brush & nipple shadow in the lower left.
Nice and clean
I like this. I love white. Good composition. Sober.
What is the piece?
I'd have different comments to make depending on how you plan to use this layout. Can't tell if this is going to be used for letterhead, poster, brochure...
It's a VERY cool design, though I think the position of the nipple might be a little off. Hmm. Let's see if I can say this without using the word "tweak." I'd lower it a bit and make the upper edge less sharp -- even though you're working with it as the brush's shadow, it bugs me that it doesn't look quite natural, at least not to me; your source material may vary.
Really clever design, ayyan!
Mara
brilliant concept
I think the graphic is perfect as it is. My only suggestion would be to body text. I think the first line is fine, but the initial caps used in the next three lines are distracting and unnecessary. The font seems almost too delicate in this point size and gray coloring. In fact, the important information -- the exhibition date and location -- actually becomes de-emphasized in the pink and stuck next to large initial cap. I recommend you explore other typography solutions for this text so that it is as stunning as the rest of the design.
Very Clever
Very clever composition. I love the white space. It's appropriate—very succinct and to the point, which is the idea, isn't it?
Your choice of typography is appealing, and yet not overdone. It's a delicate subject and it needs to be approached delicately. Therefore, I agree with your choice of typography.
I like the balance of the logo in the upper right and the paint brush & nipple shadow in the lower left.
Suzanne Maestri-Walters
wow
I like it very clever. Nice composition. Congratulations.