bracelets
aldo (121 pencils) | Wed, 2010-08-11 17:38
not too much background on this one - she sells fleur de lis bracelets - the name of the company is the first two letters of each of her four childrens names - pronounced time la la
this is my draft
thx,angie
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ha ur right about the baseline - was working on a different idea earlier n forgot to change it back ;-)
maybe a fleur de lis like this?! or maybe ill leave it out all together - still need to twerk with it
the pic posted squished??
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I feel there is too many elements to look at. I hate when people put dominant elements bang in the middle of type.
Ricky Sam
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Too busy. A single fleur de lys (perhaps in an asterisk position rather than between the words) with decorative type would suffice.
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type.... ornament.... blah....
living on dreams and custard creams.
Yeah, logos huh? A hologram of something that doesn't exist would win every time.
Write a wise saying and your name will live forever – Anonymous.
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blah... NEXT.
I see your "blah" and raise you a "zzzzz"
Leaky Penny
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I'm going to print it out and eat it.
-Unknown Artist
whoa guys hold on a sec - its not really a logo, per say as its only going on the card that the bracelets are gonna be packaged on - geesh, i wasnt going for an iconic symbol or anything lol... my apologies for being so blah ;-)
and heres my rework, so unleash the tigers
True, but the swoosh does something this logo does not: It' follows the K.I.S.S. principle. Somuch going on, but nothing is truly saying anything. Things are placed just for the sake of being there.
Whatever type of flourish the designer is trying to put into this logo is being sucked out by the font.
This logo doesn't know if it's coming or going. Nothing seems planned. Unfortuanely this makes for a very boring logo. Doesn't need bells or whistles, it needs *direction*.
Leaky Penny
Check out what I've been up to lately!
http://petersonjoseph.com
I'm going to print it out and eat it.
-Unknown Artist
Reminds me of one of my favorite music group/album names of all time...
Band: The Blow Pops
Album: Charmed, I'm Sure.
I personally liked the second one (non squished version). I liked that the fleur de lys symbol and the charm bracelets underneath were both grey. I think as the client's whole theme is fleur de lys braclets, it only makes sense to include that in your design. The type could be a little bit more of a flowing style, but its clear and draws your attention which is good. I think a design can sometimes get worse if you fiddle with it too much...I think you should run with what you had.
why dont you just drop the flourish that is it, the fleur de lys is fine and dont need to graphically represent a bracelet imo