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Criticism & Advice welcome to better this logo!

Commenting on this Image will be automatically closed on November 18, 2012.

Art D. Rector's picture
3130 pencils

This is yours? Because it sure doesn't look like any of the other logos you've posted.

Quin Designs's picture
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Yess 100% it is mine & something i have just face lifted basing on the critics & advices from here & other sites...........I guess this site is doing mi more good than harm.......but how can i make it more perfectoo!!

wgzn's picture
2107 pencils

yeah, i hadnt really considered that, but i'm not sure i'm buying that the same person who did "truism" also did this... shows a completely different mindset...

Quin Designs's picture
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Wgzn, this is rlly my logo... truism & all those crap logos was before i discovered free advice on this site... those were logos i did from my own imaginations. Like i said in some post, iam not a trained logo designer..actually self taught i may say!

This Logo is designed basically basing on the different critiscmz i have been reading on different critiques on this site.... Thanx guys & i am ready to learn more!!

YoungZM's picture
906 pencils

Forgive our skepticism but this logo doesn't look like it was improved via critique and learning. Look at the jump between the two posted images not hours apart (thunda mun empire). Usually jumps like these take people months of progression, not just a leap. It has nothing to do with learning a program, it's learned judgement that is the factor.

Good job if it's yours though..

wgzn's picture
2107 pencils

again, as in some of your others - as a "logo" there is just too much going on here.
its a fairly nice label or decal. a logo should be less cluttered. and have a clear hierarchy.

qwertyale's picture
2046 pencils

It looks like a logo you see inner games like Duke Nukem. A bit futuristic retro.
About what you can improve, certainly the tag line font size.
Some can detect penis factor inside white circle.

yes I'm brazilian xD

mara06's picture
2743 pencils

You know the Bantu word, "Ilunga"? Describes me perfectly right now.

Mara

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