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buisness logo

general logo for a local furniture company

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natobasso's picture
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Definitely go back to the drawing board. This logo is not good. Search creativebits for the article on what is a logo (here it is) and read it thoroughly. Then try again.

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stephanie's picture
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Agreed. Start over. Consider not using initialism.

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ladylee's picture
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Horrible. Take natobasso's advice :)

ShawnAllan's picture
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running text sideways?!

3dogmama's picture
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Maybe it's just my eyes being wonky, but the "T" and "F" really look like a table and the "S" a curvy seat. Try bolding up the acronym, reconfiguring the letters to conform more to a table and chair setting. And then lose the sideways type.

Tuck "HE" up under the "T"; "urniture" up beside the "F" in between its two bars; "ource" beside the "S". Bold all.

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natobasso's picture
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Then get out the straightjacket, put it on, and start spouting Nabokov while gargling pomegranate juice... :)

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Triple One's picture
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sounds like the initials my mom used to spout off at me when I couldnt have what i wanted!

3dogmama's picture
1991 pencils

I think the letters I heard the most were TFB.

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Leaky Penny's picture
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I *want* to ask where that came from, but I'm afraid....VERY afraid :P

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I'm going to print it out and eat it.

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natobasso's picture
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If you're talking about my straightjacket/Nabokov comment, I made that up. :)

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Leaky Penny's picture
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post.

Leaky Penny
Check out what I've been up to lately!
http://petersonjoseph.com

I'm going to print it out and eat it.

-Unknown Artist

3dogmama's picture
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Sorry. Can't oblige. I find straightjackets too binding and the arm restraints an annoyance when trying to down a beer.

Nabokov--I take it you mean the author, not the politician father or operatic son? If so, would my rant go something like:
"The cradle rocks above an abyss, and common sense tells us that our existence is but a brief crack of light between two eternities of darkness. Although the two are identical twins, man, as a rule, views the prenatal abyss with more calm than the one he is heading for at some forty-five hundred heartbeats an hour."
Or would it be more along the lines of:
"I think like a genius, I write like a distinguished author, and I speak like a child."

And lastly the pomegranate, although good for the arteries, is a fruit that would most likely give me the backyard trots should I ever attempt to gargle with it. To play it safe, I'll stick with bananas for my potassium intake, thanks anyway. :o)

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3dogmama

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