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Bullet Films 2

aabehm (14 points) | Thu, 2010-03-11 14:33

Here is my second effort, feel much better, but let me know.

Bullet Films 2

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Leaky Penny | Thu, 2010-03-11 15:56

This is pretty cool. The perspective works better now than before. The font has to go though.

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wgzn | Thu, 2010-03-11 18:52

much MUCH better! but yeah, the type still leave me empty...
you might also try skewing the image a bit. the absolute vertical feels a bit stiff...

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Art D. Rector | Thu, 2010-03-11 20:11

Better than the last one, but still believe there are better solutions to this idea.

Where this idea can totally rock is the little intro at the beginning of a movie where they show the company logo. I have that entire thing worked out from start to finish in my head already.

+1 on the font too.

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ranamaju | Thu, 2010-03-11 20:38

Yea its better than before, but sorry not the best logo.
Its Bullet & Films but not 'Bullet Films'. If you wants more elaborate description what I said please feel free to ask.

Thanks!
RANAMAJU
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Bureauplus | Thu, 2010-03-11 22:44

I see where you are going to.. It just needs a bit more filmreel combined with the bullets in place..
A Reel Like this one: http://www.utahvalley.org/!UserFiles/gallery/stockphotos/Film%20Reel%20iStock_000004540398XSmall.jpg

aabehm's picture
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aabehm | Fri, 2010-03-12 02:18

Thanks for all your input appreciate it.

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qwertyale | Fri, 2010-03-12 03:40

far better than last one! still need some noise to be actual... it could be their 70's logo...

yes I'm brazilian xD

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3dogmama | Wed, 2010-03-24 13:12

Film shaped like a gun range silhouette with a bullet hole through the head...

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