Business card 2
Jac8790 (10 pencils) | Tue, 2011-02-01 22:24I'm a beginning Graphic Designer/ Illustrator, and would like a critique of my business card. The type will be spot UV and the rest will be matte. I would like to get suggestions on the color, text, layout, and background. This is my second layout, which do you like better? Thanks
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I like both though they are missing the 'wow' factor I'd expect from a designer/illustrator.
Without my sense of direction, I don't know where I'd be.
Instead of using your name on the back, I would expect to see an bold icon, somethingeye catching. Like cao said, the wow factor is missing.
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Looks like the same card with a different background. If you're going this way, leave the backside blank with just the grunge and have your name larger on the front. Low key sell. Right now the info side is totally unbalanced with the small name and tight leading next to the contact info with more leading.
my business cards look that dirty after a few weeks in my wallet. Not a look I would go for.
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