this is a Business card I made is computer class for my teachers moving business Master Movers. it is finale unfortunately I don't like it that much but he dose and it was for him so yeah... so what do you think this is my first time doing somthing semi-pro I am going to school next septembre for Graphic Design and I was ust wonderingwhat you thought
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You need to pick one element and make it the most important and go down from there. right now there's a lot of conflicting elements like the type and logo fighting each other. Put the logo next to Master Movers. Make the phone number and website larger than the Climate controlled, etc. details. Put Shelly Clifford with the phone and website.
The font for Master MOvers is very uninteresting. Why not use what you used for the logo?
Otherwise, what I am mentioning are small points. The colors seem solid and the white fonts give great contrast. Well done for a project!
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Powerpoint is not a design application
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Dirt and Rust
Like I said its no use changing it now as he has printed it but thank you for the critique. I tried to use that font for the Title but he kept telling me to use Ariel Ariel Bah.. there is no use fixing it but I will use you critique with the next business Card I do if I get the chance Thank you
~ Robbie Duck
Everything is huge! Don't try to fill out all the empty space. Instead focus the attention with empty space (or as properly called white space).
I suppose you don't have much experience with graphic design yet, since you are just beginning school, I would suggest first learning some design principles, like color, balance, alignment, typography, and other things.
But I think it's really good that you are beginning to design some things now to gain some experience, and don't stress it much, cause you're eventually going to get much better at designing once you have a solid base
Just keep us post it with your progress,
Cheers
dsaunadesign.com
THE caracters are dying. Try it again
Josef Stapel