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It's a high-end water sport company operating in Cambodia. What do you think?

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caoimghgin's picture
842 pencils

Love!

Without my sense of direction, I don't know where I'd be.

taba's picture
163 pencils

Agree! Love it! I love how you took colors that you wouldn't associate with water and made it work. Great job!

Sophia Lambadaridis's picture
11 pencils

So true! Great point of difference.

Sophia Lambadaridis
Communication Designer

Leaky Penny's picture
2616 pencils

What's TBCTBCTBC?

I like it, but those waves on the bottom could maybe work better if they were bigger, on both sides of course. Otherwise excellent work.

Leaky Penny
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I'm going to print it out and eat it.

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Ivan's picture

TBC is just placeholder text for further services they will have.

Thanks all!

Leaky Penny's picture
2616 pencils

Ah! Ok!

Leaky Penny
Check out what I've been up to lately!
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I'm going to print it out and eat it.

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pmeehan's picture
6 pencils

Very nice!

Paul

Art D. Rector's picture
2769 pencils

Like.

Only one question - is it the right size? Looks too tall for US standards. You know how I hate wrong-sized cards. ;)

Ivan's picture

It's 90x50mm. Is that standard in the USA?

caoimghgin's picture
842 pencils

Ever so slightly....3.5" X 2" = 88.9x50.8mm

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Art D. Rector's picture
2769 pencils

Is that your standard size?

PS: Why are you folks still using the metric system? :-)

Ivan's picture

Because that's the standard SI. It's just Americans could not shift yet. Still using imperial systems. :)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/International_System_of_Units

Art D. Rector's picture
2769 pencils

That's cuz we're imperialists!

When I was growing up, they were teaching us the metric system in school because there was a set date when we were supposed to switch over and join the rest of the world. I guess they just gave up on that idea because it never happened. :)

Side issue (serious this time) - did you folks ever use picas? How do points relate to the metric system?

qwertyale's picture
1833 pencils

it doesn't tell me sports

yes I'm brazilian xD

Gorr's picture
41 pencils

+1

I absolutely love it. Love the colors, the squid, the whole package. But it doesn't say watersports to me.

MacEriu's picture
41 pencils

Cthulhu Lives

Had to get it out of my system, but the one eye octopus is a little creepy looking.

haizeel's picture
24 pencils

brilliant!!

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