business card design for me
wilfredomdesign (10 points) | Mon, 2007-12-17 06:37
i wanted to get some feedback on my business card

i wanted to get some feedback on my business card
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Upon the initial viewing of this..I really liked the left panel a lot. I love the font you chose for the "Wilfredo Merced" text as well as the color. I don't care for the { } around the WM although I do like the fraction look of the letters. What is the power of "d"...the power of design....Wifredo Merced to the power of design? I think the design equation at the bottom is very nice but I don't think it's strong enough to carry the entire concept of your business card. The implication is that you are a designer who is geared toward math. I love what you did the your text on the right side as well...but I would take those math signs out and just leave the white space and have your text read as it.
I think the color pairing is very interesting, but it it doesn't connect to me. Again I love the green, but the mustard brown color seems a bit off. Maybe a gun metal blue or gray would work.
Nice start! Let's see what you come up with next!
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I like it. But I would also like to see what it looks like without all those math symbols.
Van
www.vanshea.com
I really really like it so far. I love the front. The back panel, I love the idea behind it, but something is just odd there. Not sure what. Maybe if the brown color was a bit lighter or interchange the brown with blue to make the actual verbiage pop out more than the +-=? Not sure, looking good though.
Maybe if you make the +- symbols less bold and screen them back, the more important info on the back (your name, et al) will show up better.
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