Business Card Idea
Mosesmangione (20 points) | Thu, 2008-02-14 00:44I was hoping to get some feedback on this business card design.
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Not so good, bud. You spelled "graphic" wrong.
but the execution of it is poor. the words are way too small and stacked, imagine on a business card size, will it be *that* legible? That circle is way to close to the edge...you do know it might be slightly cropped right? You should use some bleed marks. Also, words seem to be scattered all over the place. Why is designs all alone. If you're a photographer, maybe you should use a photo of yours? Either way, misspelling the word Graphic is unforgivable.
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My computer studdered.
Leaky Penny
Check out what I've been up to lately!
http://petersonjoseph.com
I'm going to print it out and eat it.
-Unknown Artist
Thanks for the comments that was a real rough I just threw together so I cleaned it up a bit. I changed the font to a more readable type. I obviously fix the miss spelled word re organized the information and got rid of the large shapes to make it more simplistic.
but still, the changes you will make will be good. But in regards to the big shapes, must you get rid of them? If you just arranged it so that they bleed off the card ( the idea being you add about an eighth of an inch all around the card and have images bleed off the card) it could still work. With this type of drawing i see all the info being written by hand, in three dimensional type lettering...or what you have already. Just make it legible.
Leaky Penny
Check out what I've been up to lately!
http://petersonjoseph.com
I'm going to print it out and eat it.
-Unknown Artist
I agree with a lot of the comments above. I do like the style and where you are going with it as it is different, and I like that. I do agree that the fonts are entirely too small for the important information and wonder how legible it would be on an actual card.
My biggest question mark comes from this though... Your company name is TONY designs, yet for your name you use your full name, Anthony ? I would think as part of branding yourself, you would keep the name Tony... Why call yourself Tony Designs, if you prefer your clients to call you Anthony?