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Catalogue

jumani (23 pencils) | Thu, 2009-10-01 14:59

This was a job done for a client of mine. She owns a store which sells the items displayed. Please tell me what you think of the layout.

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robbie | Thu, 2009-10-01 15:10

is it going to be folded or flat? Im guessing its a leaflet?

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jumani | Thu, 2009-10-01 15:16

It's folded, the folded size is 5.5 x 8.5 inches. It's also 2 sided.

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Leaky Penny | Thu, 2009-10-01 15:26

Hmm, first and second panels seem a *little* cramped, but overall not a bad layout.

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robbie | Thu, 2009-10-01 15:42

looking good, band on the cover page needs to be justified to the left edge and your missing the top of the floral image in the bottom left of the 2nd page. Like it .

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robbie | Thu, 2009-10-01 15:45

and some of the orange circles arent centered to the numbers on the calender, !!

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mara06 | Thu, 2009-10-01 16:15

This is handsome, if a little monochromatic, but I object to the script font. I think it's much too casual for the conservative look of the piece and the items advertised in it. I find it odd that some of these items appear twice. Why is that?

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gwells | Thu, 2009-10-01 17:29

i'll echo most of the above (good and bad) and add that the last page, the calendar, really seems out of place. the photo of the sunset beach doesn't seem to match the feeling of the rest of the piece.

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Art D. Rector | Thu, 2009-10-01 19:38

Yeah - what's with the calendar? Why even have that when you could add more product or a mailer or something? Everyone has a calendar already.

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jumani | Mon, 2009-10-05 12:25

Thank you very much for all your comments. I understand and agree with all opinions given. It was done in a rush, which has shown in my work. However it is not final. And the calender was not my idea..lol.....it was the boss' suggestion. Again thank you all for your comments

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Dirtyharry | Tue, 2009-10-06 22:00

Typography hurts my eyes
Images look placed and have a crappy lighting effect around them.
Logo doesn't fit with the colors at all.
Words should not be overlapping the products, at least in this case
Sloppy cutting on the first page
doesn't make the products look very desirable.

But those are just my opinions.

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