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CD cover rock-band Guindul Mitzei "Comet"

drak (30 pencils) | Thu, 2006-06-01 08:56

CD cover rock-band Guindul Mitzei "Comet"

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Esteban | Thu, 2006-06-01 17:14

I really like the guys' bizarre looking and the whole painting look. I will try to work more on the comet, I think its tail needs to be blurry...is it falling?
what about the light over the guy at the left?

despite those few things I really like it, personally I think it's original.

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Flub-Dub (not verified) | Fri, 2006-06-02 23:06

for a start im not sure i understand the way the cover is folded.
maybe you could show us.

i like the feeling, i like the chroma, and boy i like the texture on the clothes.
the picture reminds of something very familiar, but i cant just put my finger on it. what is it? what is it? im pretty sure i saw something like it before.
the two guys bowed... hmm i cant tell.
looks like picasso, the faces, the hands; the same willingly wrong perspective, meant to show different sides.
could anyone help pls?

whats more to be done.
i would go for a little more ellaborate night sky.
some blue shades, like looong loooose dark blue clouds, smaller, dense stars.
make it look more like a romantic cosmos view.
that should add depth to whole ensemble.

i like the fact the two characters look like twins, brothers.
if you take a closer look, one has lighter armour with a self projected beam of light and one is darker. maybe you could amplify, emphasize this polarity.
this totally depends of what are you trying to say. but if you could tune up the face or the eyes of the left brother, make it look a bit more into the "Light" side maybe you could say a bit more.

im excited to see a next iteration

and as the guys in the MD ad would say

"Good job."
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Flub-Dub (not verified) | Fri, 2006-06-02 23:08

looking a bit more, it looks religious, gregorian... and definetly picasso.

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