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mitchelle2child's picture
33 pencils

CDL 2

One of the directions proposed to client this week (Discount House)...

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GregSauce's picture
110 pencils

- too much variance in the type
- the boxes around the frame look like 1995
- check your justification, you have right and center justification all over the place. looks messy

"Good design is obvious. Great design is transparent."
— Joe Sparano

"Good design is obvious. Great design is transparent."
— Joe Sparano

mara06's picture
2548 pencils

Cute concept but too much type, very confusing. Think about your hierarchy.

Mara

Ivan's picture

Too complex and busy. Simplify!

mitchelle2child's picture
33 pencils

Thanks Guys...
... Somehow it seems to me i only see my but open only when u guys tell me... why are my creative colleagues not telling me how open i am?... and my Creative Director not noticing too...

Thanks Guys... Guess we learn all day...

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