CDL 2
mitchelle2child (33 pencils) | Thu, 2009-05-21 12:30One of the directions proposed to client this week (Discount House)...
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One of the directions proposed to client this week (Discount House)...
Keep on smiling!
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- too much variance in the type
- the boxes around the frame look like 1995
- check your justification, you have right and center justification all over the place. looks messy
"Good design is obvious. Great design is transparent."
— Joe Sparano
"Good design is obvious. Great design is transparent."
— Joe Sparano
Cute concept but too much type, very confusing. Think about your hierarchy.
Mara
Too complex and busy. Simplify!
Thanks Guys...
... Somehow it seems to me i only see my but open only when u guys tell me... why are my creative colleagues not telling me how open i am?... and my Creative Director not noticing too...
Thanks Guys... Guess we learn all day...
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