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julian.micheal's picture
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Club Soda Logo

Hi

This is my first submission in this website. I made this logo for a regional beverage co. I named it as Thanda (Hindi word means cool). Feel free to comment and give me some suggestion.

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wgzn's picture
1711 pencils

well handled. but it looks kind of boring. like a label for paper towels

Leaky Penny's picture
2616 pencils

I saw the thumbnail i thought of paper towels.

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samtgarner's picture
20 pencils

I have to agree with the other comments. I thought it was for paper towels too when I saw the thumbnail. Try mocking it up on to a bottle see how it looks.

Maybe try more water drops to give it that chilled condensation look. Make it look like you want to hold it and drink it

qwertyale's picture
1833 pencils

"fresh" needs to be more visible.

can't imagine a beverage brand without applying at bottle

yes I'm brazilian xD

taba's picture
163 pencils

I got paper towels too.

Art D. Rector's picture
2769 pencils

Paper towels.

You can also have a lot of fun with a project like this - cutting and pasting the same water drops for each side is not going to be enough in the real world. You need to put some effort into this. ENJOY it - because MOST of your projects will be tedious and boring. This is the kind of thing where you can be artistic. So be it.

Ivan's picture

Needs more life. It looks too clinical.

Sophia Lambadaridis's picture
11 pencils

I thought it was dishwashing detergent with those adjacent bubbles until I saw the disconnected type underneath.

I'd start over, Julian. Consider also the socio-demographic of those drinking this soda.

Sophia Lambadaridis
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