My immediate reaction was to be drawn to the bottom one. Maybe it's the symmetry. Obviously the text needs justifying and tweaking etc but I like it. Whatever that may be worth! :0)
Also make the blue a little lighter. The ray of sunshine looks really oddly cropped too. This idea is better than the last, but this project can be pushed SO much farther, it's one of those projects where a flood of ideas come in, for me anyways.
I will edit my original thoughts and say time to think outside of this box. Take Leaky's advice and push the idea further - have fun with it. Don't get stuck on this one idea.
Another possibility is to put a little bit of perspective for the box.
The ray of sunshine looks too blocky and cropped too much...
From the three designs above, I prefer the small sun in the middle one. Refine the rays.
thanks guys, i will use your comments to create a new set of ideas,
many thanks
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My immediate reaction was to be drawn to the bottom one. Maybe it's the symmetry. Obviously the text needs justifying and tweaking etc but I like it. Whatever that may be worth! :0)
Perhaps making the box square and staking the words on top of each other so they fit well?
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Also make the blue a little lighter. The ray of sunshine looks really oddly cropped too. This idea is better than the last, but this project can be pushed SO much farther, it's one of those projects where a flood of ideas come in, for me anyways.
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I will edit my original thoughts and say time to think outside of this box. Take Leaky's advice and push the idea further - have fun with it. Don't get stuck on this one idea.
Another possibility is to put a little bit of perspective for the box.
The ray of sunshine looks too blocky and cropped too much...
From the three designs above, I prefer the small sun in the middle one. Refine the rays.
horrible.
suppose to be a yellow kamikaze submarine identity.
yes I'm brazilian xD
thanks guys, i will use your comments to create a new set of ideas,
many thanks
16 billion colours and you choose the one i cant create !??!