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Creekstone Redesign

I had an outside web company do the website and it was really horrible so I did a quick design, let me know what you think... here's a link to what the webdesign company gave me http://creekstone.netfinity.net/

Creekstone Redesign

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The existing design by the web-design company isn't too bad. Pretty much a run-of-the-mill out-of-the-box design. Your design certainly adds a little more flair to it and your navigation is more concise and less confusing. The 'Home Finder' feature is better suited where you have positioned it. However, your design feels a little incomplete. The images of the homes on the right of the site look like they have jsut been dropped in - no cohesion with the rest of the design.

All in all, I think both designs are ok - but both need some refining.

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Your style is certainly more refined and better than the linked version.

The only thing I don't like on your design that wavy line. It's overpowering the beutiful visual in the header. Can you make the line thinner?

Also, I would give some thought as how to finish the layout on the top. I guess the straight cut looks a bit unfinished. I'm not sure...

Good job.

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