Critique pls

Hmm...Ever read Tom Robbins' "Even Cowgirls Get the Blues"?

I'm a bit unsure when it comes to the colors..

It's something about them I don't like, just a feeling!

After a while of thinking, I'm pretty sure I've seen those colors in a similiar add for the same thing hehe, where I can't remember..

I agree - something's wrong with the color. I think the vilotet background is too active - it even made me look away from it. Also the hand's color is a bit unnatural. But this may be different when printed.

thanks i'll review the colors.

Doesn't the shadow in the purple look a bit wierd?

I must say, Ivan, I love the whole concept - very clever! :) I'm not sure if something like that would actually go over well here in the states. ;)

let me just tell you that this ad was inspired by a bit of information i picked up from a book of Dan Brown. i don't remember which one, but he tells the story that thumbs up is actually an ancient fallic symbol and when somebody showed it to you that meant you're hot and i have a hard-on. not exactly the same words but that's the idea. now, whenever i see someone showing thumbs up to me - i run. :)

Ivan couldn't you make the shadow to be ah you know what you've probably got between your legs..

And btw.. nice smiley we got here on the forum :Y: :lol:

i was sent this ad for a condom. this is such a BS!

the copy reads: The tough part isn't getting her to say yes, it's getting het to stop saying yes. :roll:
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That ad is really bad.. it sux! :D

Clever copy writing, good photography... all ruined by ugly fonts and horrible color choices. The giant condom package doesn't help either.