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Critiques on logo?

Logo for a television / radio production company. Uses three values of a single spot colour. (plus black)

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Landon91's picture
82 pencils

I like this. A nice simple concept that sends a message. The main rounded rectangle can be interpreted as a tv or a radio. You may have a problem with readabilty when zoomed out. But otherwise, good job!

riskart1's picture
146 pencils

The problem I have is that the empty box seems to compete in hiarchy with the name of the company.

Also, it might be more interesting if "entertainment" were in a different san serif font?

qwertyale's picture
1833 pencils

research typography
this logo could entertain someone at 70's

yes I'm brazilian xD

Leaky Penny's picture
2616 pencils

I'm going to use this word once, and once only.

It doesn't "pop" enough.

Leaky Penny
Check out what I've been up to lately!
http://petersonjoseph.com

I'm going to print it out and eat it.

-Unknown Artist

designmonkey's picture
98 pencils

There's that word again. "POP"...I cringe when I hear it.

monkey1979's picture
684 pencils

shame on you leaky, it needs more BANG.

150% more PIZAZZ.

living on dreams and custard creams.

wgzn's picture
1711 pencils

my problem is trying to draw the connection between the name and the image.

visually, i just dont feel anything "entertaining"

if the name was corus "productions" i could better swallow the whole mattebox metaphor...

Art D. Rector's picture
2769 pencils

Reverse "Corus" out of the box.

Hello.

riqsane's picture
149 pencils

I wonder if my hand can fit through there.

Ricky Sam
www.rickysam.com

JW Wolf's picture
11 pencils

Great mark man. I like the movement created by the hash marks.

wgzn's picture
1711 pencils

anyone else notice the OP has said NOTHING?

Leaky Penny's picture
2616 pencils

Posted a week ago? Maybe he got busy?

Leaky Penny
Check out what I've been up to lately!
http://petersonjoseph.com

I'm going to print it out and eat it.

-Unknown Artist

wgzn's picture
1711 pencils

hey, i hate to thread hijack. but what happened to that guy who posted his whole portfolio here a few days ago? his images and all comments are gone.

did i miss some drama yesterday?

monkey1979's picture
684 pencils

I was juat wondering the same thing...

living on dreams and custard creams.

Leaky Penny's picture
2616 pencils

Art D. made some critiques, OP didn't appreciate them, OP got mad.

He claimed they were his own drawings, I provided links with the "references". He also claimed that he does have accounts to clip art sites. I pointed out some if not all of his work was merely clip art and random fonts, but that that is ok, there is a market out there for 14$ logos, if that's his thing.

OP deleted all comments and went back to Dribbble, I assume.

Leaky Penny
Check out what I've been up to lately!
http://petersonjoseph.com

I'm going to print it out and eat it.

-Unknown Artist

Art D. Rector's picture
2769 pencils

Damn. Wish I could remember what I said now.

wgzn's picture
1711 pencils

wow. sorry i missed all that.

wgzn's picture
1711 pencils

but good riddance anyway. if that's the case...

lucious87's picture
48 pencils

Thanks for the comments folks! Yes I did indeed get busy working on the id manual for this company. Ended up fine tuning the logo by darkening the blue a little and making the type a cool grey colour. Looks much more balanced now.

I guess I missed some drama?

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