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sondos's picture
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Dasman Lounge

Hi all... its my first time to post a critique.. anyway just thought i'd let u know :p

Here i've created 3 different concepts of a logo for the Dasman Lounge which will be in the kuwait airport.. its for the vip's and 1st class only...
kasco (kuwait aviation services co.) is incharge of this lounge...

ok take a good look and im waiting for ur comments ^_^

Thanks for ur time...

chaw

Dasman Lounge

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nixter's picture
9 pencils

I think the last one is the best. it looks the most elegant and since it is for the VIPs elegance is what you want.

I do like the second one alot but I don't think it is elegant enough.

archmedia's picture
587 pencils

the last one hands down, for a VIP lounge i'd use that over the two other ones without a doubt. though i'm curious why such a change in the colour schemes? (orange in the second one, blues in the others?!?) what is the airlines colours?

as is, the colors on the last one and the style work together nicely.

ther only thing i'd work on from there is the typography at the bottom, and i'm curious what the type says on the back curve of the "D"?

nice work.

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Apfhex's picture
325 pencils

It says "First Class", and I would suggest moving it, it's really not working there. But I agree that the third logo is the best!

sondos's picture
32 pencils

Thank you all for ur replies :)
archmedia: what type do you suggest i'd use?.. i dont know i think the type ive chosen works ok with the logo...
hmmm the colour schemes... the airlines use blue thats why i chose blues in the 1st and 2nd design.. about the orange its because in the brief it was describing the lounge the logo would be in.. and it talked about the colours which were cream and brown..... i guess its not a good enough reason right? :p

Apfhex: moving it, hmmm i dont know i tried but didnt really find a good place, only centered under the word dasman lounge.. what do u think?

Apfhex's picture
325 pencils

Centered under "dasman lounge", maybe. I think anywhere would be better than where it is now because it interferes with the logo too much.

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