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Deepak Popat Logo

This is a logo concept for dental clinic. I'm looking for constructive critiques so please comment.

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Deepak Popat Logo

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angeepangee's picture
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To me it just doesn't feel balanced. The 'Dr' part is just floating up top and not really aligned with anything. And the fact that each word has a different font and different italics makes it seem rather thrown together. I like the font for 'Dental Clinic' though.

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natobasso's picture
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The tooth logo has been done to death for dentists. Can you break out of the box a little on this one and think of a different icon?

Remove the colors for now. Get the text all together. It has potential, but too many styles are represented. Try two fonts or fewer, and by fonts I mean styles; don't mix italic, bold and all caps in one logotype.

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pokie's picture
1198 pencils

Tooth is over done.
Copy treatment is horrible and unbalanced.

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