Democracy Rain

i sense you never really describe the purpose of your posts to the critique section, unfortunately it makes it hard to give feedback cause we don't know what you're really aiming for.

With that said, the feels bland, and passé (outdated), not to mention saturated.. it's been done once too many and just doesn't have the effect it should have. I've seen it too many times..

Yeah, there should be a mandatory description of critiques...

and the type is lame.

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Although there isn't much information provided for the concept or purpose, I think you could visually convey the same idea in another way. This is very literal—bombs raining down from the sky. You could always explore the shape of the bomb, rain, etc. I had some good resources on non-profit/social awareness campaigns in this sort of feel that you have going on, it's very Saul Bass-esque. If you want to explore more stylistic exewcutions check out Saul Bass or Art Chantry—both I think are very good, rough, may lend itself to the subject matter.

Also, you might want to check out Ads Of The World or Ad Council for visual exploration. Those are the 2 most relevant sources I could think of. They may help you with saying what you want say in a more creative way. Hope this helps!