design my website [redesign]
darkprint (46 points) | Tue, 2008-05-06 15:52hello every one
am a young designer, new to web, only one year as web designer
i would like some critics on my website design http://www.conceptplusdesign.biz/
thank you
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Still too many fonts and too much going on. Needs work. Keep going!
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Powerpoint is not a design application
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Dirt and Rust
Too much going on. And to be quite honest, for a designer selling his services, I'm not impressed with the design. It looks like the typical blog. In fact, it reminds me too much of Freelance Switch. Focus on priorities and get rid of the attempted cleverness.
Some other things:
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thank you for all you critics
well am a learning designer, i was not in web design nor follow any cources about web design, i did a diploma in graphic design, i know i have loads to learn. thank you again for your critics. i will follow the rules. :)
just want to remind that i am from mauritius, a small island in the indian ocean. Client here are starting to get in design but their perceptions are years back. Even i i would like or can create any world class design, it wont work here, the target audience is not prepared.
Another point i have receive nice critics, thank you again ; but when i see those people who say am not creative or else, hummmmmm i check their work and !!! wont say more :)
anyway thank you
am only one year in webdesign. soon i will try to find some time and do the changes you requested where possible and will send back the link.
Regards
Darkprint
by the way conceptplus is the name of a virtual company and darkprint is my nick name as here in mauritius we are not allow to work for a company and work freelance. thats what i do. lol so i have to keep a nickname as i cant display my personal info online
Design principals are universal. Hierarchy. Emphasis. Contrast. Rule of Thirds. The Golden Mean. Do a web search on these topics and you will then round out your education. Claiming geographic location as a hindrance to your growth is just that: A hindrance to your growth.
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Powerpoint is not a design application
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Dirt and Rust
What is that supposed to mean? Are you referring to me? I hope not, because none of my work is on the Internet, so you couldn't possibly have seen it.
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I'm sure that wasn't directed at you. Your work rocks! This is the typical 'please critique me but I will lash out at you if you don't love my stuff' kind of comment.
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Powerpoint is not a design application
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Dirt and Rust
well i have been learning web on internet. i surf alot talk with other designer to progress. thank you again for your advice.
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